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flower made of sand
Contributed by
blackholesun
on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:42:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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helping myself the best way i know how,
i speak to the trees and give a bow,
a simple note in time the ways off wisdom seem to rhyme,
tales and stories in my ears,
washing away all of my tears,
feeling magick in the air,
a life so bright and fair,
singing in the sunlight that the dome of willows let through,
i remember clinging to you,
with a comfort no one could ever demand,
you stood for me to be my man,
walking in the soft pale sand,
a white buding flower in my hand,
i ask for nothing more,
but this feeling to last and that life doesnt go by so fast.......
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blackholesun
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2004-11-19 16:42:10]
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Re: flower made of sand
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 05:09:33 PM AEST
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| GREAT POEM! so much feeling! |
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Re: flower made of sand
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by LEMMEN on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 06:18:37 PM AEST
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Very well written so many feelings. Hold on to this love and i'm sure it will last.
~DENNIS~ |
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