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Perception
Contributed by
gimpie
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:06:29 PM in AEST
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I wonder what my future holds
And if the tale's worth being told
I'm not the saint I try to be
I'm just a girl who'se breaking free,
I'm trying hard to find the me
That I would want the world to see
But with the worlds' perceptions it's hard to know
What is or isn't okay to show,
No one is equal although they say
The world's supposed to be that way
We each are victims of this or that
And no one ever steps up to bat,
But once in awhile love shines through
Though it only seems for a tiny few
That it ever works to where love will win
Amidst the hate in this world of sin.
Copyright ©
gimpie
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2004-11-19 21:06:29]
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Re: Perception
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:15:17 AM AEST
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| excellent write. fantastic last stanza. |
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Re: Perception
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:01:21 AM AEST
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| Why this didn't get more comments I'll never know. It's seems to me to be a good write with rhythm and rhyme. (And I'm with you on the " it's hard to know What is or isn't okay to show" part!) Definitely keep writing! Cheers! |
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