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Wake up
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:44:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Wake up to a light filled room
Warming the soul
My first thought is you
Waking up all alone
Such an empty home
Since I left your thoughts
What goes through your head now?
Be gentle
I break down easy
Look
But don't touch
It's the life that I live
Other's break the mold
That I made for them
Trip and fall
Face first in your guilt
You feel guilty for things
You can't remember anymore
Round off the edges
Don't cut open your heart
Your blood will run dry
Flake
Then blow away
Just as mine does everyday
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Re: Wake up
(User Rating: 1 )
by daydreamer22 on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:48:28 PM AEST
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great job...this is a terrific piece...keep it up
Awaiting your next...
~*ME*~ |
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Re: Wake up
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 10:10:31 PM AEST
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| excellent write. mind blowing with its excellence. |
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