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Coffin
Contributed by
adsalamon
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Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 07:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Wood grain against the skin
The pale features blend monotonous
into one desperate formation
Purple velvet draped around
the harsh rigid structures edge
The calm seems to unreal, too unbelievable
too imaginary
For once all were filled with colour
ALl shined, all alive, but now felled
with the brutal axe.
Now the companions in death
sleep together
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adsalamon
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2002-11-22 07:15:00]
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Re: Coffin
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 02:27:31 PM AEST
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All i can say is this
one gave me chillbumps
Thanks for sharing it
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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