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Wait for me...
Contributed by
Roshie
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Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Dark, cold and broken,
Shivering helplessly, defeated.
She lies there, no words spoken,
Her face red, her mind heated.
Body weak, knees shaking,
She lies there all alone.
I kneel beside her, my heart breaking,
To me she is well known.
Tears are coming, I hold them back,
She looks at me, I cry.
I hold her hand, then see the tracks,
Tonight this girl will die.
I pick her up and hold her tight,
Help is coming soon.
Ambo's coming, lights are bright,
The sirens are in tune.
They run in, but stop on entry,
"This girl is gunna die".
I hold my breath, I feel so empty,
I'm numb, yet, I can't cry.
The room is silent, no one is breathing,
"I'm sorry", one man said.
I feel so lifeless, mind is grieving,
"I have nothing, my best friend is dead".
I lie awake in bed at night,
I could have done something more.
We grew apart, all we did was fight,
But I need her now, more then before.
Two pills it takes for ones life to end,
It's a high price to pay.
But when you lose your only friend,
There is no other way.
The room grows cold, my eyes they close,
I feel my life is fading.
She holds out her hand, an angel like pose,
I knew she would be waiting...
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Roshie
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2002-11-22 07:30:00]
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Re: Wait for me...
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 01:08:09 PM AEST
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AAAWWW This is so very sad ,yet beautiful!
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Re: Wait for me...
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by OreO on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 02:17:16 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful, and so
very sad, i think it's a beautiful'
way you've expressed how you
feel here. Thanks for sharing
thsi one i really enjoyed this
beautiful piece.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Wait for me...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 06:48:10 PM AEST
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This is so well written...with so much emotions... very sad tho...
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Re: Wait for me...
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by Fwog on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:35:44 AM AEST
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Another beautiful write,
my heart crumbles everytime I see you have posted another poem.
The pain you carry has to be too much for one so young, I feel that you are strong, but one can only bear so much.
I cry for you, and admire you so much.
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Re: Wait for me...
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by Fwog on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:37:19 AM AEST
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Another beautiful write,
my heart crumbles everytime I see you have posted another poem.
The pain you carry has to be too much for one so young, I feel that you are strong but one can only bear so much.
I cry for you.
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Re: Wait for me...
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:10:12 AM AEST
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Good poem .
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Re: Wait for me...
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by rustygrl33 on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 04:31:51 PM AEST
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| i think i'm gonna cry!! that was too sad.. but good write! |
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Re: Wait for me...
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by EmptyWords on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:36:06 AM AEST
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Roshie,nice and heartfelt.You have a great way with words.The whole poem was well written but the last stanza got me....
The room grows cold, my eyes they close,
I feel my life is fading.
She holds out her hand, an angel like pose,
I knew she would be waiting...
Excellent. |
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