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End
Contributed by
RavenL
on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:04:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A silent tear
Glides down her cheek,
She cant go on
She feels too weak.
The blood flows freely
Shes letting go
But theres one last thing
That she must know.
Who caused all of this
Was it she
It doesnt matter now
Her soul is free.
Her shortened life
Flashes before her eyes
The pain the hurt
The fear the lies.
But very soon
It will be all gone
It will end
Before the dawn.
Her time here slows
It wont be long
She once was weak
But now is strong.
If only she
Had had a friend
This might not
Have been her end
Her short time here
Is now done
And this war
She has not won.
Copyright ©
RavenL
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2004-11-20 10:04:31]
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Re: End
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by pixie on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:06:35 AM AEST
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very dark and emotional, good write,
pixie xx |
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Re: End
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:46:38 AM AEST
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Very sad and lonely write. I can feel the dispair she must have felt Good job Well written.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: End
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 09:59:15 PM AEST
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darkly, sadly beautiful. i love dark poetry...and this one is definitely a favorite.
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