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Run away
Contributed by
RavenL
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:08:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She looks around,
No one there.
Its just her mind
Giving her a scare.
Down the road she hears a dog
Barking at the trees.
They make such eerie shadows
Swaying silently in the breeze.
Slowly she walks,
Making no sound
You cant even hear
Her feet hit the ground
She wants to be quiet
So no one will hear
For then they might find her
Thats her biggest fear
She ran away
The night before
So silently
She slipped out the door
She ran as far as she could go
Just trying to get away
Not knowing where shed end up
Or even where she would stay
They searched for her all through the night
And then through the day
No one knows where she is
This is how it must stay
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RavenL
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2004-11-20 10:08:56]
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Re: Run away
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:05:33 AM AEST
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this is an awesome write.. however running away don't solve anything .. I've ran away from some of my problems but it didn't make them go away.. just deal with them as they come .. awesome write
peace and hope
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