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Mirage
Contributed by
danimus
on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:01:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Sometimes I feel as thought I'm a mirage
People stare but never know
How.
I got there
Do I project something entirely different?
From what I think
Now.
From that time spent
Not to think would be all lies
Apart from representation
Misunderstood sometimes
But its resolution
Far away nobody knows
Me as I am
Nobody wants to get close
I am only a man
Only a man
A man of depth
Man of depth
Not just a mirage
For staring but to draw
draw you in
draw you in
Under my skin
Plenty to give
Untouched and fragile
So learn me for awhile
Copyright ©
danimus
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2004-11-20 14:01:57]
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Re: Mirage
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by jace on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 02:15:20 PM AEST
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I can feel your lonliness in your write well done
real powerful |
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Re: Mirage
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by NeonHusky on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 04:06:43 PM AEST
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| i too feel a certain loneliness. i also love how you compared that invisible feeling to a mirage. i've felt like that many times, people dont see you as you are. but what does the line mean "for staring but to draw"?? as in fooling people with that mirage?> and what about the line "so learn me for awile" what does that mean? good write. check out some of mine!! |
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Re: Mirage
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:35:53 PM AEST
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| This poem had a really good sense of direction and it came to a head properly. It grabs the reader on a personal level, and it reminded me a whole lot of John Lennon's kind of setup. This was a really good poem. |
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