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Instant
Contributed by
luinil
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:04:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Theres a face in my head
I cant quite see it clearly yet
Im running out of tears to shed
Will you wake before the sky turns red
Theres a place in my mind
Ive never been strong enough to find
On that day the sun forgot to shine
Will I feel you breathing one more time
Theres a moment I feel
I close my eyes but cant conceal
The sweet taste of secrets you reveal
Was there ever a time that you were real?
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luinil
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2004-11-20 19:04:57]
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Re: Instant
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 12:49:00 AM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Instant
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 08:58:26 AM AEST
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Ive noticed that you dont have many comments on your poems.
Im wondering why.. because youre amazing.
I love the simplicity, it all seems very beautiful.
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Re: Instant
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:40:49 PM AEST
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Wow..this is incredible!!
Great write..
Jenni |
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