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Please don't care
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:13:59 PM in AEST
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please don't care
that i am sad
your wasting your time
it hurts real bad
please don't care
that i am dead inside
your wasting your time
I wish I can hide
please don't care
that i hate me
your wasting your time
Im dying you see
please don't care
that i always feel pain
your wasting your time
Im going insane
please don't care
that i wanna die
your wasting your time
I must say good-bye
please don't care
that i am dead
your wasting your time
its all in my head
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Re: Please don't care
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:59:29 PM AEST
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| I feel like this all the time, all the time i want to die and stop feeling, stpo breathing, but i cannot, nor can you, it is never a waste of time for anyone who cares, if it were not for the few i have who care for me, i would not be here you see |
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Re: Please don't care
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:08:26 PM AEST
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We do care you have so much to share. Most of us have been there where people don't seem to care. Your write just flowed smoothly easy to read keep them coming.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Please don't care
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by girlg0newrong on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:24:26 PM AEST
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I like this one so very much. I too have felt this way, I wish the people who love me would just stop caring so I could die and know they were not hurting. But they will never stop and that right there is enough to keep me going.
Keep ya head up, things will get better eventually. Great write. |
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Re: Please don't care
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:31:03 PM AEST
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I like this. The straight speak works well here, I think. Any other approach would probably overcomplicated the message unnecessarily.
This sort of reads as if you've been wanting to say this and finally just blurted it out ('blurted' sounds kind of negative I'm afraid --- I certainly don't mean it in that way). I, for one, am glad you did.
Well done,
SNM |
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Re: Please don't care
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 12:26:31 AM AEST
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| another brilliant write dani. im glad its all in your head. |
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Re: Please don't care
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:23:42 AM AEST
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What can I say....It was only Brilliant. It reminds me of someone from the past! Excellent write. Great stuff! Loved it¬!
Corinna |
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