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Remembering The Blade
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:29:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Thin cuts run through my arms
Up and down and across
Never ever doing harm
Always finding me when I feel lost
Thin honest lines as If paper made
Are the only ones who really know
How many times by them I have been saved
Scars I will always hide and never show
Worn with pride when I feel alone
When I have been made to feel like a small child and
When my pain is fully grown
When reaching out for someone only find a razor in my hand
Passing out from the pain with a closed fist
Dream of murals that my blood did paint
Waking up being dragged back by the wrist
Feel my self writhe from all the pain
I am only made to suffer like this
Feel the walls close in and drive me insane
And all I do is cry and asking why
Why am I so alone left with a heart turning to stone?
Alive but feeling little and wondering if I really did try
Maybe next time I will just cut right to the bone
Maybe my next time I will say my goodbyes
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Re: Remembering The Blade
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:42:12 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. You expressed how you felt very good and i could almost imagine the emptiness you ust have felt. I hope you are doing better and I hope you do not cut anymore. because you always have to remember this- even though you feel as the world has turned its back on you, there is always a person who loves you and will take your hand. Take care! - xXluckie_lynnXx |
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Re: Remembering The Blade
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:51:27 PM AEST
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Words spoken true from a heart that is blue a cutters life is never pretty on the inside. We that cut are alone and sad. Three months that great. I know everyday must be a struggle every day you must have faith keep up the fight. You allready have made the first step. By not cutting. Keep writing Keep sharing your words. Look to the pen it's better than a knife. GREAT JOB AND HAVE A HAPPY TWENTY FIRST BIRTHDAY.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Remembering The Blade
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:40:55 PM AEST
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| great write. happy birthday. i hope you have many more anniversaries to have. =] |
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Re: Remembering The Blade
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:43:19 PM AEST
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I love this line it says so much:
Dream of murals that my blood did paint
I adore this poem because it holds some of my true feelings...
Hurting and just pure emptiness......
Lovely |
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Re: Remembering The Blade
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by EternalNight4x on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:20:41 PM AEST
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| very well expressed write, I can relate to this very well because I too cut...I haven't been able to not cut for that long of a time yet but I'm trying...and you're doing so well so don't give up...ha I sound like a loser...anyways great write keep it up |
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Re: Remembering The Blade
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by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:57:24 AM AEST
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When reaching out for someone only find a razor in my hand
Dream of murals that my blood did paint
These 2 lines were quite powerful to me. Sad, sad poem. Full of loneliness and despair--as life so often seems. I liked the rhyme scheme in this one, it gave it a nice easy flow.
~Carrie~ |
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