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I'm Dead
Contributed by
shattered_heart
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
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Can't you see that I am dead?
My flowers of hope have blossomed,
and are long gone.
My heart has pounded,
and now does not even beat.
My eyes once saw beauty,
but now all I see is black.
My head made good decisions,
but now a thought dosn't cross my mind.
I once loved someone,
but now I don't even have feelings.
I am dead inside and out.
Isn't THIS what you wanted?
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shattered_heart
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2004-11-20 21:45:00]
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Re: I'm Dead
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by Gimpie on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:50:48 PM AEST
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| wow, I like. It's pretty deep. good write |
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Re: I'm Dead
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by iodinelove on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:52:04 PM AEST
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it's not what i wanted.....people are no fun when their dead. People are fun when their alive...watching the life fade from their eyes is, well, tedious. Emotional torture is much more amusing, wouldn't you agree?
I like this....course, i wouldn't comment if i didn't....well, i might, but not likely....anyway, before i start babbling away (which i think i'm doing already) I'll say bye and hope to read more. ^_^ |
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Re: I'm Dead
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:23:41 PM AEST
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| good write. it doesnt matter what they want it matters what you want. |
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Re: I'm Dead
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:23:20 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it! |
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Re: I'm Dead
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 03:53:36 PM AEST
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this is a great poem...i kinda cannected to it...great job....i loved it
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears
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Re: I'm Dead
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:02:35 PM AEST
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| i have no idea how anyone could want this of you |
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