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Teen
Contributed by
Stej
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:53:25 PM in AEST
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Vandalised by spite and hate
Raped dead, its just fate
Drunken parties, polluted with booze
Youve heard it all in the daily news
Deaf and blind, theyve felt no pain
Yet live to die, woe they feign
Cutting wrists, innocence lost
Countless lives drinking has cost
Why cant they just open their eyes
See the world as it is, behind all the lies?
But have you yet heard the story of a teen
Heard what life could truly mean
Just see it in their eyes
Walking the bridge of life itself
Crossed childhood, put it on the shelf
The promise of day, its soon to be
The people of tomorrow, cant you see
See it in the eyes of a teen
Reach up, just touch the sky
Dont want to fall, its you whod cry
A new horizon, its soon to be
Thoughts of a teen- why cant you see
Just see it in the eyes of a teen
Violence in the streets, cursed lips
Innocence you sorely miss
Yesterday you saw them waddle
Tonight they took pills from a bottle
Haunted, theyre drained hollow
Have no path, no road to follow
Thought they cared, but youre wrong
Theyve fooled you for far too long
But why do you have this impression
That we're all the same, it's a misconception
Why don't you see this vision that we have
Of life to be
Love to be
Hope to be...?
Walking the bridge of life itself
Crossed childhood, put it on the shelf
The promise of day, its soon to be
The people of tomorrow, cant you see
See it in the eyes of a teen
Reach up, just touch the sky
Dont want to fall, its you whod cry
A new horizon, its soon to be
Thoughts of a teen- why cant you see
Just see it in the eyes of a teen
Copyright ©
Stej
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2004-11-20 23:53:25]
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Re: Teen
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 12:04:10 AM AEST
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| brilliant. i loved it. this was perfect in every way. |
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Re: Teen
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 12:09:39 AM AEST
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| wow, this is so good... im a teen.. its perfect.. great write |
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Re: Teen
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by unkept on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:48:00 AM AEST
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| i like the repetition, and the fact that you used the eyes as the focus gives the poem a sense of hope and loss of innocence...i like it. |
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Re: Teen
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by Row on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:53:38 AM AEST
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| stej-o this poem is just brilliant. Reading it, the flow never even faulters. This is just insanely good. and has a real good message to bring as well, right-on |
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