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His love
Contributed by
lovewithoutend
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:40:48 AM in AEST
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His Love
His love flows through me
As his hand reaches for mine
He tugs to bring me closer
His arms envelope me
His breath teases my hair
My heart swells
My nose is engrossed by the smell of him
My heartbeat accelerates
As he leans down to kiss me my lips raise to greet his
If I lived forever I could truly say I would never get enough of his love.
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2004-11-21 01:40:48]
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Re: His love
(User Rating: 1 )
by wench on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:35:50 AM AEST
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Nice poem. You could make it more powerful though especially the end.
A moment frozen, the kiss, the touch, my sense reel with him, he is my love.
Something like that.
Don't know but I enjoyed it in any case |
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