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The Journey
Contributed by
trivking64
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:45:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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THE JOURNEY
A moment lingers,stealthly clinging to space
Where time can't erase the inevitable essence
Its presence is felt,but often seldom accepted
Within the decrepit walls of incandescence
Where the light which travels unravels each second
Even as voices beckoned to be restored
They're ignored as,undaunted,the dimming continues
And the hues reflected now angle toward
An image unseen,yet encaptured fully
And so duly noted upon each who surveys
Within each gaze of wonder,the thunder rumbles
And crumbles facades of bygone days
Leaving behind just the stains of madness
As the strains of sadness resonate
Not waiting for entry; they arrive uninvited
As each lighted realm does dissipate
Till blackness surrounds and sounds have fallen
To mere sullen murmurs of echoing screams
Thus the dreams are silenced,amidst violent pauses
Which causes revisions of storybook themes
Copyright ©
trivking64
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2004-11-21 01:45:51]
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Re: The Journey
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by unkept on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:37:54 AM AEST
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| absolutely amazing....the melancholy is overwhelmingly beautiful. i like your style. |
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