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Lonely and Not Loved
Contributed by
unlovedchild
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:58:34 AM in AEST
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Lonely and cold
All by myself
This is so unkind
I wish I were somewhere else
If only into another place I could go
Where I could escape the troubles at home
Away I would run into this world
A place where I could feel loved
Maybe a simple warmth in the air
A smile on someone's face
To show that they care
Being loved must be nice
By someone
Anyone at all
If I knew how it felt
I probably would be happy
But I don't so I'm lonely
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unlovedchild
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2004-11-21 02:58:34]
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Re: Lonely and Not Loved
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by kyletycz on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 03:10:35 AM AEST
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nice write, could use a little revamping, but maybe that just because im not the most appreciative of free verse poetry, but i do like the subject of this poem, i long to be loved by another instead of longing to be loved back by the one i love, i like the write none the less
l8r
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Re: Lonely and Not Loved
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:11:29 AM AEST
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Good stuff... don't change a thing.
I know the feeling as well. |
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