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Roses Are Red
Contributed by
--skoTch--
on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:33:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Roses are red, to thine self be true,
Forever bleeding, through and through.
I try so hard to meet the depth in your eyes
I can see your soul, naked and exposed.
But you shut me away; cast a shadow over the glow.
I lay here shivering, wanting your warmth about me.
Take me away; bring me to your world.
Let me encounter your mind.
Pull me inI have no fear.
Show me.
I swear I will stay forever within your prison.
I promise I will bleed.
Cross my heart, hope to die,
Ill kiss your soul with my last sigh.
If I should scream before I wake,
Stab my heart and make it break.
I laugh bitterly as we walk hand in hand into fatality.
Dont let go, dont ever let go
Yet the darkness beckonsand with one last stare
Left alone in this world unknown.
Laugh hysterically, and fall upon my knees.
I will scream my love, maybe youll hear.
Tears fall as blood once did.
Afloat, face down and carry me away.
Here I come, wont you wait for me?
Roses are red, red as your blood.
Roses are red, red as my eyes
Kill me softly, my love, take your time.
Ill be waiting.
Copyright ©
--skoTch--
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2004-11-21 16:33:05]
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Re: Roses Are Red
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:44:34 PM AEST
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Dark and lovely!
Laurie |
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Re: Roses Are Red
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by THORN on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:25:20 PM AEST
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That is just... breathtaking! Fantastic write!!!
5 stars :)
Cheers,
-XRaye |
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Re: Roses Are Red
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by Dusty on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:40:52 PM AEST
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Great write. I loved it! Nice and dark.
~Dusty~ |
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Re: Roses Are Red
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 07:02:50 PM AEST
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I like the dark take on the ususal soppy "roses are red"
but i'm sorry if this has any true reflection on your life.
Either way, it's a great poem... |
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