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burn here beside you
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:11:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Once I said I loved you.
Once you said you loved me.
How those words must choke you now.
You vomit them out because you cannot stomach them.
Don't think I don't see the hate in your eyes.
I know you don't care for the hurt in mine.
All the nights I've layn broken beside you.
Crying in the coldness.
All I feel from you now.
One day, I'll get up and leave you.
But when I see you, I just don't know how.
God, it is hard to love unrequited.
To live with a passion you'll never return.
So until death takes me I'll burn here besides you.
Forever awake I'll ly shaking and starving...
Praying for someone to turn on the light.
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Re: burn here beside you
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by Aquaelius on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:22:54 PM AEST
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Don't exactly know what requited means, but it sounds very ominous in your write. Lot's of anger, contained anger... kill your spouse one night after too many drinks anger. Right on!!
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Re: burn here beside you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:36:04 PM AEST
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| sounds like lyrics that Stabbing Westward would use, adn I love SW, great job. |
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Re: burn here beside you
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 09:24:49 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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Re: burn here beside you
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by bruised_hands08 on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 07:53:08 AM AEST
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| It's great. Something very odd though, I can relate to this almost perfectly! email me sometime... purple_candy_clouds@excite.com |
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