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running out of life
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:13:56 PM in AEST
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Wounds always open, never having enough time to heal before some one comes past and tears them alittle more with each fight and break up.
The two faces of people always messing with my head.
One minute the love me, cant live without me...
Next moment feel likes forever when they've left with someone better, pulling my world down around me.
Live for love... or love to live?
Either doesn't count, never turns out, never goes my way.
I've only got these broken photos of a bad memory,
Only have the bad feelings you left me with.
It's all I've got left, and it's nothing worth living for.
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Re: running out of life
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by Aquaelius on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:20:27 PM AEST
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Never a truer question:
"Live for love... or love to live?"
Hopefully both... good write.
Aq.
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Re: running out of life
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by SWCSuzyQ on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:41:12 PM AEST
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| Nicely said, Love to Live, is probably first then all else falls into place. |
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Re: running out of life
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by DeadInside on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 08:05:06 PM AEST
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| very well written. very sad, i know where your coming from on this one. |
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Re: running out of life
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 09:22:56 PM AEST
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| powerful write thats well written. |
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