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Old photo, Old Me
Contributed by
renstar
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:20:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Old photo, Old me
As I look into the eyes of the girl in the photo
I see the innocence of my soul
I am taken away to a place I used to know
A place Called happiness
and the hope and dreams I once dreamed of
I remember as I reminisce
I remember a time when every experience was exciting and new
I remember a time when my heart had never felt the ache of loneliness
And the world in which i lived seemed so honest, happy and true
But now the girl in the photo has grown
and lifes harsh realities are uncovered and known
i will never look at the world through innocent eyes again
because my eyes have seen all of lifes lies and deceit
and i know that i can never be all of the wonderful things i wished to be
it is hard to believe the girl in the photo is really me
in my hands I hold this old photo in my heart I remember the old me.
Ren*
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renstar
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2004-11-21 19:20:03]
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Re: Old photo, Old Me
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by Aquaelius on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:24:49 PM AEST
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It's never too late, I'm seeing that now. Very good write...
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Re: Old photo, Old Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:28:34 PM AEST
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| such captavationg words, it draws you in from first word to last, well done. |
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Re: Old photo, Old Me
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by SWCSuzyQ on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:29:15 PM AEST
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| Good but heart wrenching, I'm sure all of us remember who we once were, we just have to remember our inner child and let her/him out once in awhile, and I'll take my advise also, thx for reminding me. Suzy |
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Re: Old photo, Old Me
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 09:02:44 PM AEST
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| excellent write. heart wrenching. |
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Re: Old photo, Old Me
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by JennyB on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 11:57:42 AM AEST
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| Great poem! I can relate to that in so many ways. |
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