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My El Dorado
Contributed by
Oriana
on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:47:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Sunlight streaming through the trees, this is where I want to be, in this place my mind is free.
Free from stress and loud noise.
Free from yells and silly toys.
Majestic moutains.
Flowing rivers.
Black velvet skies and star filled seas.
A place for me to sit and wonder.
A simple place for me to ponder
over the events ever twisting, ever changing,
ever turning into something new.
Copyright ©
Oriana
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2004-11-21 19:47:39]
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Re: My El Dorado
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by Aquaelius on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 08:41:41 PM AEST
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I think I feel the same about my Toyota Corolla...
Aq. |
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Re: My El Dorado
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by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 06:39:00 PM AEST
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| ya..this really reminded me of my bathtub. bubblebaths are a must nowadays, so my El Dorado is my tub. This was a nice descriptive poem that actually said something. Good write. |
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