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Holding Hearts
Contributed by
gentledove
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:56:07 PM in AEST
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Let me hold your heart in mine,
I'll dust it off and make it shine.
Forever one, the two shall be,
Embracing love through eternity.
Let me hold your heart forever,
I'll slay the demons that try to gather.
Together we'll dance through rain or shine,
Give me your heart to hold in mine.
You have to be able to weather the storms
and let someone else take over when your heart is weary.
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gentledove
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2004-11-21 22:56:07]
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Re: Holding Hearts
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by Thunderwolf on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 11:02:05 PM AEST
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I will always hold your heart. I'm glad that you hold mine.
love you Thunderwolf |
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Re: Holding Hearts
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 02:40:35 AM AEST
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| that was truely beautiful |
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Re: Holding Hearts
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by Laksha on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 03:11:05 AM AEST
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| I love the part about slaying demons and dancing- going through the trials and joys of life together. Keep writing!!! |
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