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Human kind (genre humain)

Contributed by Karazoul on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 11:55:11 AM in AEST
Topic: political

Le plus grand dfault de ces tres noirs,
Est certainement son grand dsir de vaincre,
rien mme l'amour ou la paix ne pourra le convaincre,
Chercher en vous et voyez que vous aussi voulez la gloire.

L'homme depuis le dbut des temps veut tre fort,
Entre les pays on cherche savoir qui est le plus puissant,
Chez l'homme qui aurra et ferra le plus d'argent,
D'autre veulent simplement sans penser, le confort.

Mais, certaine personne russisse vaincre leur ambition,
Et au contraire de l'homme usera de la compation,
Au lieu de faire la guerre elle prparera la paix.

Dans un monde humain rien n'est candide ,car c'est lui qui la conu,
il devrait apprendre parfaire se monde imparfait,
plutt que de continuer vivre dans ce monde dchu.

Copyright Â© Karazoul ... [ 2004-11-22 11:55:11]
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Re: Human kind (genre humain) (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:08:36 PM AEST
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Although i cant understand it...i am sure it is great!

Re: Human kind (genre humain) (User Rating: 1 )
by Karazoul on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 02:54:15 PM AEST
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How can I correct my poem

First i write To this dark creature called "Human"

Secondly I make some french mistake like

Le plus grand défault de ces êtres noirs,
Est certainement --leur-- grand désir de vaincre,

Re: Human kind (genre humain) (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:18:15 PM AEST
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Tu as su très bien peindre la réalité dans ce poème...Ta dernière strophe termine ton poème d'une manière excellente.
~PumpkinPie

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