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Trying To Come To Terms
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Trying to finally come to terms,
With a scary past the hurts & burns,
One that blames you for all that went wrong,
The one that took from your heart its song.
I try so hard to let things go,
Try to forget the force of the blow,
Its so very hard such a difficult task,
For a little bit if help is all I ever ask.
I want to forever walk far, far away,
From my past all of my darkest days,
I still blame myself for a lot of things,
When I think about them its stings.
Thats why I bury myself in drink,
When you are drunk you dont have to think,
I wish that I could wipe out my past from my mind,
But its not that simple as my past isnt kind.
Things that happened over the years,
Still cause my soul silent tears,
On the outside I look somewhat calm.
Inside I am tainted & damaged from the harm.
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pixie
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2004-11-22 12:17:30]
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Re: Trying To Come To Terms
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:30:56 PM AEST
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| This is really good! |
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Re: Trying To Come To Terms
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by Angelic_Demon on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:42:54 PM AEST
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Hey, this was really good...
xx
Mars |
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Re: Trying To Come To Terms
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by Kayden on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:53:29 PM AEST
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| You really painted a picture in my mind on how your past was. It was a really good poem |
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Re: Trying To Come To Terms
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by Renstar on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 03:36:27 PM AEST
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| excellent, i understand how it is to try and and numb the past with drink,but if u havent already i hope u will realise that it only gives temporary relief and that u are strong enough to get through anything without substituting one bad situation for another...great write well done |
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Re: Trying To Come To Terms
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 05:51:31 AM AEST
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*tears rolling down cheeks*
Krissie ur pain always makes me feel sad,
but i am glad u share it with us.
Drink isnt the answer but sometimes it helps.
Stay strong hun, you can get through this.
You are such a wonderful person.
*hugs you so tightly*
This is a great poem even with the content.
*hugs you again*
please take care hun
love
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