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Phoinex
Contributed by
Kayden
on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:42:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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My begining is my end and my end is my begining
For unlike other creatures
I have special features
For the astonishment and eleaganse is set in my flame
For my beauty is uncomparableto even the lovliest of rose or flower
And when i am fully revield you will have no idea what i am
For never have you seen such a beautiful thing as me
Then when i die i become ash
and that from the ashes i may rise again for my begining to once more become my end of firey flight.
Copyright ©
Kayden
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2004-11-22 12:42:41]
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Re: Phoinex
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by pixie on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:44:17 PM AEST
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very good write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Phoinex
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:44:54 AM AEST
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| Good write,Welcome to site! Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. |
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Re: Phoinex
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by fielding88 on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:30:53 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. U really captured the title in your poetry, and u never even used the word. Really nice. |
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Re: Phoinex
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by candysears on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 01:29:35 PM AEST
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Very good write..
God Bless! |
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