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Phoinex
Contributed by
Kayden
on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:42:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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My begining is my end and my end is my begining
For unlike other creatures
I have special features
For the astonishment and eleaganse is set in my flame
For my beauty is uncomparableto even the lovliest of rose or flower
And when i am fully revield you will have no idea what i am
For never have you seen such a beautiful thing as me
Then when i die i become ash
and that from the ashes i may rise again for my begining to once more become my end of firey flight.
Copyright ©
Kayden
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2004-11-22 12:42:58]
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Re: Phoinex
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by paula_kay23 on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 04:43:55 PM AEST
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lovely first write, very unique keep em coming
paula xx |
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Re: Phoinex
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by mysticaldancer on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:54:59 PM AEST
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| Very nice...different from others I've read...keep writing!...they can just get better |
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