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Lady Pain
Contributed by
KM
on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Gently gently
Her bow plays the embrace
of bittersweet reverie
A caress of mind
and sinew
delicately grips
one base of the skull
a lesser man weeping
I recall
She is a lover
whose insistence known
but trusted
When an moments rejection
Would tear image
and sheriff
to rupture the heart
in a most brutal way
My lady cant speak
To the almighty healer
whose eyes rudely roll
contempts private highway
a Godlike entity
With the insight
Of
a
duck
Mistress melody
For these ears uniquely
Her passion
Can not be discounted
But now it draws late
and as all passions fade
she wishes
To be
Alone
Gnight my lady!
Oct 24 2002
Kent Mackey
Copyright ©
KM
... [
2002-11-22 15:40:00]
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Re: Lady Pain
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 04:35:43 PM AEST
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Well this is definately
different, i was understanding
the whole poem all the way up
until it says … a Godlike entity
With the insight
Of
a
duck
I don't really get that part of the
poem but i enjoyed it alot, Thanks
for sharing this one. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Lady Pain
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by KM on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 05:10:32 PM AEST
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| Sorry for the confusion... it's my personal jab at disinterested doctors with immense egos. |
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Re: Lady Pain
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 06:57:30 PM AEST
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Interesting write..
Jenni |
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