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Promise of that Dream
Contributed by
reilt
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 01:59:23 PM in AEST
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oops
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Morning Lost mid-way between breakfast and And... Words are running away, the dat slips From recognition Seconds seduce the minutes Minutes manipulate hours Oh hours hurry past Past the morning maze That trips in all this weakness To forget but never a success
Morning Hindered movements Empty, Empty stomach Right in the pit Marooned somewhere between The psuedo most important aNd least of worries Castaway on this island of thought Of the single thing That is a saving grace for this day If only, only An ease into tonighht And that dream again.
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2004-11-22 13:59:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Promise of that Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_bear on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 02:06:13 PM AEST (User
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does the dream really come? good write |
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Re: Promise of that Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by Oriana on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 03:24:58 PM AEST (User
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Dreams have a funny way of pulling you back into the realm of sleep don't they. Great poem ^_^ *gives you a cookie*
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