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Restless and Tired
Contributed by
vondutchchick08
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 03:05:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Everything has been going wrong,
And now Im starting to cry.
The thoughts of losing you are constantly running through my mind.
I guess thats why Im here,
Lying awake in bed.
You are the best thing that happened to me,
But now those dreams seem dead.
Your feelings for me are lifeless
As are mine for you.
I hate to admit it,
But its true.
Copyright ©
vondutchchick08
... [
2004-11-22 15:05:50]
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Re: Restless and Tired
(User Rating: 1 )
by imnohbdy on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:26:41 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed the poem, but I think it would have been better had it been about something you had experienced, that way you put a little piece of your heart into it. Always remember write what you know. Again this is still an exellent poem. |
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