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Densely evil brethren.
Contributed by
little_genna
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 04:08:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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From within my darkness there is some spark of light,
It is luminescent and insanely bright,
At this point in time it is too blinding,
Least it has stopped me from causing bleeding.
Your voice comes from within the illumination,
This makes my heart brighten.
I walk through my darkness towards the sound,
Alas, still, you can’t be found.
I carry on stumbling forwards like a lovesick fool,
Feeling like this is incredibly cruel.
Yet still I feel drawn like a moth to a light beam,
I feel myself awaking…it has only been a dream.
Or has it, I am now only surrounded by blackness,
As if time has become ageless,
Nothing seems to change, forever identical,
At first it seemed like you were my guardian angel.
Yet very much the opposite, you were a friend of Satan,
Part of his densely evil brethren.
SJ
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Re: Densely evil brethren.
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by antares on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 05:29:30 PM AEST
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yea i hear ya!! it was a great write that i enjoyed very much! I can definitly relate to it, i have written many a time with those same feelings! u should check some out and see if u like them. i definitly thought urs was awesome and hope to read more. keep it up!~antares
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Re: Densely evil brethren.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:55:41 PM AEST
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| Whew! I can relate to this. You described your attraction and resultant confusion extremely well! Cheers! |
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