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Winter
Contributed by
gregb242
on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 04:17:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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A wonderland of freezing cold
Ice is shinning, trees a fold
People bundled by the fire
All the kids are not yet tired
Playing in the melting white
Their faces full of great delight
Flying down an icy hill
Full of fear but laughing still
Wonderful things floating round
Until at last they hit the ground
A snowman melting from the sun
Its warming up for everyone
An icicle falls to the ground
People dancing all around
Until next year the snow is gone
Up into the blazing sun
Up into the blazing sun
Copyright ©
gregb242
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2004-11-22 16:17:08]
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Re: Winter
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 04:42:13 PM AEST
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Aw, how sweet! You captured the feeling of winter well! Nice imagery! Good write!
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