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The Remedy
Contributed by
apcfan
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 06:59:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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With the remedy in my hand
The redemy I thought would end all my misery
I took off the cap and started to down it
With the remedy in my throat
It tastes of vile poison
As I start to feel the remedy decay my veins
I feel a sharp pain in my stomach
The pain dulled and my body numb
I though the remedy worked until I saw her
She was terrified
Like she had seen a ghost
Thats when I knew no redemy could cure
This heartbreak except her unconditional love
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2004-11-22 18:59:37]
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Re: The Remedy
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by freckle on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:55:05 PM AEST
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| I like the lines, "She was terrified, Like she had seen a ghost". I imagine it would be like that. Good write. |
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Re: The Remedy
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:38:13 AM AEST
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| No remedy can cure that. Only time. This was such a nice poem to read. And when 'she' sees him, it's really chilling. Great read, great write. |
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