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Silencing My Feelings
Contributed by
pyro_88
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:51:24 PM in AEST
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Loosing my mind.
To many things going on in my mind.
My emotions are all crazy.
Theres no use in clearing them up.
I try not to ***** anyone off.
But it always seems to happen.
These feelings i have are causing friction.
Why do i have to be so stupid?
Why do i have to feel the way that i feel?
How many tears do i have to cry,
before i finally decide to be silent?
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Re: Silencing My Feelings
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 02:20:46 AM AEST
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I'm not sure either. This seems rather linear - I would have liked if you could have brought some sound analogies into play here, but there are none to speak of. As an expression, its OK, I guess - but its nothing remarkable.
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