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My World
Contributed by
Kiena
on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 08:52:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I live in a world of darkness,
A place that hates itself.
It tells me to give my opinion,
Then puts a hand over my mouth.
I am one person
Just a single voice.
You tell me to speak,
Then take away my choice.
How could you try and hide me?
This world was built by us.
The free spirits and free thinkers,
We're the ones that you should trust.
Please give us back our voice,
And let us be ourselves.
Tell us that we can speak,
And remove the hand from our mouths.
Copyright ©
Kiena
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2004-11-22 20:52:33]
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Re: My World
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 09:36:38 PM AEST
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such a sad write.
try like i do , bite the hand that dares to cover your mouth. shout for all the world to hear, i will join my voice to yours to rise above the noise.
great piece
The Voice
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Re: My World
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:15:20 PM AEST
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Great write!! Welcome to YPDC...the best poetry site on the net.
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Re: My World
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by Jen54 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:30:33 AM AEST
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Great poem. It's so true.
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Re: My World
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by Kewi on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 07:25:51 PM AEST
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| So sad but so true. I really like it. Kudos for you. |
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