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The last time
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 09:35:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The last time
I looked into your eyes
they tore into me
with that look in your eyes
that only says a million things
you look away
I'm not ready for anything
The last time
I touched your hand
in the dark
in the woods
feeling it
the electricity
The last time
I see your smile
next too me
looking in my eyes
can't look away
never look away
The last time
I hear your voice
in my head
always in my head
The last time
you say goodbye
I'm not ready
I'll never be ready
The last time
I felt your eyes on me
always tearing into me
The last time
the last day
the final day
The last time
I'll ever see you
I miss you
goodbye
Copyright ©
MnMnMsrcool
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2004-11-22 21:35:22]
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Re: The last time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:00:46 PM AEST
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| this is so sad, but beautiful. good job! |
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Re: The last time
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 11:12:00 PM AEST
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Very sad but ver well written good job.
~DENNIS~ |
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