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Confession
Contributed by
Tamara
on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I don't know how to say this
In any other way
I can't do this without hurting you
But it's something I have to say
For I have found another
Someone other than you
I knew I would end up hurting you
That's something I never wanted to do
But I knew I must break my silence
And confess that it's you I did deceive
I will pack my bags soon
I'll get my things and leave
I know you must despise me
For the pain that I have caused
I would not blame you
If you throw me out the doors
I don't expect forgiveness
That's something I don't deserve
The only thing I ask of you
Is the happy memories, you must preserve
Though I have hurt you
You need to move on
There's no point hanging on to something
Which is long gone
You will find another
Who will share your life
He will treat you like a goddess
You will become his wife
He will take you places
Show you things you've never seen before
He will take your pain away
And then you won't feel hurt anymore
Copyright ©
Tamara
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2004-11-22 22:33:45]
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Re: Confession
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 11:02:23 PM AEST
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SO SAD,I WISH YOU STRENGTH TO CARRY ON! I HOPE YOU DO FIND LOVE & FIND IT TRUE!! BECAUSE YOU SOUND SO NICE I PRAY FOR THE BEST OF YOU!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Confession
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by Dusty on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 11:12:11 PM AEST
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I think it's really awesome that you can write from your father's point of view, shows strength and maturity. Awesome write, sucks that the subject is so sad.
~Dusty~ |
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Re: Confession
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by bethb02 on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 11:54:39 PM AEST
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very gentle and simple
It must have been sad to write |
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