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whirlwind, the brainstorm
Contributed by
dantoad
on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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jealous. like hera, she was the jealous wife.
but why not be when he is sleepin around?
dreams, paintings are what i see
colors, vibrant, feelings, linger
ima dreamer, u kno
if I blur italltogetherlikeanewyorkcityday
will u hear what i am sayin? i think no
and if no one will why do i try?
hope
like the cowardly lion's chant of 'courage'
i say
hope
why do people keep living day after day?
hope
and why do i sit here and dream?
hope
don't cry to me
i am scared
of this, seeing you
i wanted better, not trash
white trash
life is trash
trash me, delete me away, forever
crypt, crap that's my life
a gothic dream of plum colored lipstick and black eyeliner
don't cry to me
i have learned to be quiet
don't scream aloud, or cry audibly
for then the secret is out
i hate secrets, especially mine.
go far run hide baby i loved this but heaven is hell.
nov 2002
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dantoad
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2002-11-22 19:00:00]
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Re: whirlwind, the brainstorm
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by OreO on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 10:47:15 PM AEST
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yes i do see it LOL striking
fear in the hearts of americans
everywhere Thanks for sharing
this one i really enjoyed it alot
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Re: whirlwind, the brainstorm
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by Rage on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 02:34:26 AM AEST
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Hm, different. And yes, I saw it too. Great write though.
"if I blur italltogetherlikeanewyorkcityday " <--- Brilliant line
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