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Cold Shoulder
Contributed by
alexb
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:27:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im wasting my time
Lying to myself
Trying to make it work
But it never would and it never will
Im hurting myself
Im making it worse
Wish I could stop
But you make it so hard
I couldnt stop my feelings for you
All those years
I waited for you to move
I waited too long
Now youre gone
Im killing myself
Breaking my heart
You dont even care
You just turn away
Im dying in front of you
Why dont you stop it?
Whats wrong with you?
I dont know what to do
I hate seeing you with him
Every single day
Wanting it to end
But I was to shy
I hate my life
I lay!
Wishing for death!
I pray!
Wishing for death!
Without you!
I wont live!
I ask of you
One more time
One last breath
Listen to me
Give me a chance
Dont let me slip
Im falling farther away
Dont lose your grip
My life is in your hands
Give me a chance to show you my love
Im asking for love or death!
Copyright ©
alexb
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2004-11-23 09:27:03]
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Re: Cold Shoulder
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:08:01 AM AEST
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Ouch. You need to work on using some apostrophes in your contractions, but you've said this loud and clear and conveyed the feelings with energy.
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Re: Cold Shoulder
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:50:39 AM AEST
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| Wow this is a great song or poem well I just wanted to say that I can relate to this so many ways, I hope she gives you a chance, well Great Write !! |
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