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Good-Bye
Contributed by
the_fallen
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:41:04 PM in AEST
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I lie on the ground with the only thing you left me
A flowermade of blood
The only memory I have of you
Before you ripped out my heart and left with it
I see an image of you, fading away, whispering
Good byeforever
Seasons change, year pass by, as my end comes near
Death touches the nape of my back and comes closer, them whispers
Hello, Im hear to take you now
He helps me up and takes me underground
There lies my afterlifein the fiery pits of hell!
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2004-11-23 23:41:04]
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Re: Good-Bye
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by darkplaidbabe on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:04:48 AM AEST
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i almost wanted to cry reading this, beautiful. well done indeed.
always with love and devotion
~Brynna~
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Re: Good-Bye
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:28:53 AM AEST
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| Well done but very sad! Christina |
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