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Something
Contributed by
Red_October
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:57:38 PM in AEST
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something stirs
& brings a beautiful soul
closer to mine
something happens
when our spirits
entwine
something raw
creates
every delight
something whispers
that my
heart will be alright
something lingers
after he
looks into my eyes
something softens
the lonliness
i still feel inside
something grows
with every
kiss he leaves behind
something fills
the emptiness
i try to hide
something tells me
to never walk away
something reassures me
and persuades me to stay
something keeps me going
one day at a time
that something is
extraordinary
that something is
not mine
that something is
the reason
that something
blows my mind
that something is
a someone
that someone is
everything
that someone
is my extraordinary
that someone
is ahkeem
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2004-11-23 23:57:38]
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Re: Something
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by Nardo on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:53:45 PM AEST
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Hi Tiffany,
Just wanted to let you know that I have posted a new piece. I hope you enjoy it!
Leonardo (thats my full name.) |
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Re: Something
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:42:12 AM AEST
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Beautiful write filled with emotions of knowing but yet not quite understanding. Loved it!
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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Re: Something
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:32:51 PM AEST
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Something
about the way you flow
fascinates me
well done. |
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