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Inopinate Love
Contributed by
Pyrochick
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:54:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i wish i could stop time
push the rain drops aside
look through
and see you
press my lips
against yours
gently take
your hat off
my fingers through your hir
put your hand on my shoulder
and pretend no one is there
carefully lean your head back
kiss you very hard
remember the first day we met
it all started with you comin out of a car
i hardly knew you
you hardly knew me
now look at us
we're in love
who could've seen
theres things i still don't know about you
and i'll wait forever to learn
i'll always remeber you are my true
love and that love will eternaly burn
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Pyrochick
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2004-11-24 11:54:00]
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Re: Inopinate Love
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:00:53 PM AEST
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so beautiful...i remember how i met my love also...but he's lost at the moment...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Inopinate Love
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:02:52 PM AEST
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awww this is really beautifully written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Inopinate Love
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by socialburnin on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:58:45 PM AEST
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| beautiful, beautiful work...im jeaolus |
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