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Boy beneath my surface
Contributed by
In2thetwilightzone
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:49:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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seal my lips with a kiss,
and watch me drift away,
my eye turns blind,
my shouilder cold,
you turn your back and walk alone,
i can see you wither and crumble,
your sweet, gentle heart breaks in the clutches of taboo,
your pride tarnishes beneath your feet,
i see a reluctant tear soaring to the edge,
but you stem the flow with a thought,
"il come back again,
il try tommorow"
but its not that easy my sweet,
its not that easy my rose,
tommorow may seem a brighter day,
but inside i am bitter to the marrow
never can i let you come closer,
never can you be part of my life,
i know deep down my heart beats warmer for you,
but only as a friend could you ever be seen,
in my head your childish rounded face occurs,
but i cannot purify my soul with guilt,
and i cannot live with pain,
so i runaway with a thought of failure,
if only things were different,
if only your heart wasnt in this place,
your the kindest boy i know,
and i admit i love you beneath the surface,
but only intentionly,
inside you are like my best friend,
the kind of love i wish i could have with any friend,
but all i have is you,
and i must choose you,
and never push you away,
if only you could understand that tomorow will be the same as yesterday
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Re: Boy beneath my surface
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 03:59:43 PM AEST
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Platonic?
"in my head your childish rounded face occurs,"
Interesting use of words.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Boy beneath my surface
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:22:33 PM AEST
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| powerful ending. great write. |
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