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Alone
Contributed by
naughtygurl
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:22:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I am alone....
I always have been. Scared, and afreaid by myself.
wanting to be held, but no one is there.
I am lost in eternity.
A darkness that's everlasting.
Nothing is visible.
I want to see you, but this vast haven is closing in.
I am afraid.
Losing all hope.
I keep trying to hold on to something.
I want so bad to be found.
I am falling
into the shadow as it grasp's me.
I feel like i'm losing everything.
It's gone, everyones gone nothings left.
I want
to let go,
this time i'm giving in
the truth is.........
..........................
I'm Alone
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naughtygurl
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2004-11-24 17:22:49]
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Re: Alone
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:26:24 PM AEST
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you have great potential.... this was filled with raw emotion.
Very well done :o)
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Re: Alone
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:47:18 PM AEST
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this is a great write it reminds me of my poem
Remembering The Blade
if you want you can read
if you do you might relate |
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Re: Alone
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:08:05 PM AEST
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excellent write. you write better than i did when i was first starting to write poems/songs. i thought some of these stanzas were fantastic for being written so well. keep it up, keep improving, and keep writing what YOU think and feel.
if youre alone you can invent an imaginary friend =]...maybe i should take that advice sometime eh? ::remembers all the poems ive written about loneliness:: |
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Re: Alone
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:17:18 PM AEST
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this was pretty darn good. The emotions
were raw and painful. I liked it so I don't know
how you could make it "better". Keep on
posting.
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Re: Alone
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by cooley1818 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:06:03 PM AEST
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good write, the feelings of being alone truely sux, trust me i know what its like, ive felt that way sense my ex girl broke up with me nearly a year ago, alot of emotion in this poem, i really enjoyed it
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