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Look Into the Mirror
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:50:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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One look into the mirror
I hate the person that I see
A take a second glance
Is this whats become of me
Hollow, pale skin and
Drained empty eyes
A shattered soul
Is whats become of I
Brittle brown hair
Conceals my lifeless face
A insipid physique
Like most the human race
And engraved into my
Frail ashen skin
Are forever remaining scars
Running deep within
There is nothing to me
Distinguishing from the rest
All radiance I once had
Has suddenly left
Invisible is whats now
Become of me
Ill never be like other girls
So perfect and pretty
So I look into the mirror
And hate what I see
I look into the mirror and
realize I hate me
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
... [
2004-11-24 18:50:46]
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Re: Look Into the Mirror
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:57:12 PM AEST
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you might have changed on the inside and outside, but changes dont last forever.
brilliant write. well written and well expressed. |
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Re: Look Into the Mirror
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:57:32 PM AEST
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Well u r a great writer.
This is sad but written extremely well.
Take it easy on yourself as we're only human.
U should be really proud of your writing.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Look Into the Mirror
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by Rachel on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:05:48 PM AEST
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| great write. I really like it and it reminds me of a lot of stuff I did last year. keep up the great work :) |
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Re: Look Into the Mirror
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by cocacola1331 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:55:48 PM AEST
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| Know that feeling. Love your poetry. Keep it up! |
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