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It's Kind Of Funny
Contributed by
tasteof_ink
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:13:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's kind of funny
how much you mean to me
but sometimes i feel like
to you i'm just nothing
i don't get why you love me
or why you even care
i really do need you
so for you these feelings i share
you're everything to me
i feel like theres nothing more
you're the one who completes me
i'll always be here for you,that's something i swore
you are the sweetest being
i've ever gotten to know
i'm so glad you're here
you've made me grow
it hurts to see you in so much pain
when your happy you truly steal the rain
i can't go one day without missing you
i love you.
i love you.
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tasteof_ink
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2004-11-24 21:13:58]
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Re: It's Kind Of Funny
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:37:37 PM AEST
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Re: It's Kind Of Funny
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by witch_derna on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:42:06 PM AEST
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The rhyming on this was fine. Not all poems have to rhyme :) I gave this five stars I really liked it.
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