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Sold My Soul
Contributed by
calista
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:13:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sold My Soul
November 24, 2004
I had to make the choice, I didn't want to...
Save myself from misery,
Or take it away from you?
We couldn't both be freed,
One of us had to stay behind,
I had to fight against my greed,
And ask myself why,
I even agreed...
So I signed my life away,
To ease the pain in your heart,
And burden myself with the dark.
Now I never feel the sunshine,
Now I cannot hear the laughter.
Everything I see is temporary,
And everything I know is hereafter.
Watching you, my tears fall slowly,
Rolling,
From my eyes into a puddle at my feet,
Contemplating all my losses, this lonliness, this defeat.
Because, you never smile anymore,
And even though I took your pain away,
You're aching for me, but I want you to be the same,
As you were...before.
Before I sold my soul and regretted it,
For not seeing the deceit under everything.
Before I realized it didn't matter which,
Because either way we'd both suffer,
The loss of the one we were in love with.
I had to make the choice, I didn't want to...
And though I took your pain, I still lost you...
Copyright ©
calista
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2004-11-24 23:13:50]
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Re: Sold My Soul
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by Shadow on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:24:06 PM AEST
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| This realy hit home for me. I had a g/f rather resently that left me. She said alot of what you wrote here. This is a beautifal wright and it deserves more praise than a lowly shadow can give. Excellent wright. |
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Re: Sold My Soul
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by givingin on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:29:46 PM AEST
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wow, very emotional/sad.
I really liked this poem.
I am so sad now....
awwww.......
GREAT WRITE!!!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Sold My Soul
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:16:56 PM AEST
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| sold something and still paying for it. |
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