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cold and broken
Contributed by
dizza_13
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:20:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There was a time when you let me know,
Whats really going on in your life,
But now you never show that to me do you,
Ive been here so many times before,
Ive walked right through that open door,
I used to be alone until I knew you,
But love is not a blissful song,
You give yourself and it all goes wrong,
And every love you try to rescue,
Its sends a cold and a broken feeling through you.
I used to love with all my heart,
But all it did was tear me apart,
You find your love and you think its true,
But they dont even look you,
And then youll cry all through the night,
And it's not somebody who's seen the light,
Who hears the call,
And catches you before fall,
And then you see what love can be,
And you go back to love so happily,
Until you feel so cold and broken dont you.
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2004-11-24 23:20:32]
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Re: cold and broken
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by Jen54 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:33:48 AM AEST
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wow is what comes to mind.
it touched me. great write. |
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