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You Rape My Mind
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:33:14 PM in AEST
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You rape my mind night after night,
I no longer struggle I am too weak to fight,
You scare me more then anything before,
I wince when you hit me & call me a whore.
I beg & plead, ask you to stop your abuse,
But you just laugh & flat out refuse,
I am your puppet; you are the master puppeteer,
I run to hide when I feel you coming near.
But I can not run away as you are in my head,
The only way I can escape is if I were dead,
But I want to live now I have love & a best friend,
But my sanity forever you are trying to bend.
No longer do I cry my tears are long gone,
I just lay there still & let you carry on,
You get your kicks if I struggle & resist,
I just drift away & try to get lost in my mind mist.
All I wish is for you to leave or become bored,
Find a new toy to settle your scores,
I am now just a shadow of a damaged soul,
Yet you continue to burrow in my head like a mole.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-25 13:33:14]
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Re: You Rape My Mind
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by babygurl33 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:47:15 PM AEST
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that is a rele good poem...yu did a wanderful jod!!!!! I feel the same way in a way
xxDestinyxx |
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Re: You Rape My Mind
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:49:11 PM AEST
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Very intense and moving piece, an inspiration to all of us to keep on writing.
Your gift was a pen and you use it well !!
Take care
Steve
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Re: You Rape My Mind
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:03:11 PM AEST
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Pixie your such a great poet, your writing skills are beyond my reach. This is really one good poem.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: You Rape My Mind
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:06:25 PM AEST
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| very well done pixie. you expressed your excellent talent of rhymes and rhythym yet again. |
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Re: You Rape My Mind
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by venkat on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:57:19 PM AEST
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Oh..pixie.. dear..these are very sad movements in the life of a girl...hmm..
I wish you peace and happiness..
oooh...big hugs my dear girl..:-) venkat |
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Re: You Rape My Mind
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:52:02 AM AEST
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wo this is so sad.
I really don't know who's doing this to u but I'M SO SORRY U FEEL LIKE THERE'S ONLY ONE WAY OUT.
So sad but writeen wel.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, strength,
emy
I pray u will find courage to get a way from this awefull treatment. |
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Re: You Rape My Mind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:04:56 AM AEST
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ypu got a lot of emotion in that head girl! good writing.
Johnny. |
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Re: You Rape My Mind
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by Jen54 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:15:22 AM AEST
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emotional poem. it captured something that
most don't relize.
Keep up the great writing!
-Jen |
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Re: You Rape My Mind
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by ImHearingVoices on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:23:32 PM AEST
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WOW this poem is amazing though very sad. This poem brought tear to my eye. Stick in there Pixie very emotional and talented you are.
xXx Lunicor |
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