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Run The Sky
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:45:17 PM in AEST
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Cold was the day, amber sun stretched her long arms into morning
In better times a warming caress, now the herald of an end
There in the silent dark she lay, a soft bed scarce comfort in her dying hours
He knew it was her time, each fleeting second stronger the call to the grave
Tears welled in his tired restless eyes
Rolled down his cheeks as he witnessed a brave fight for life
Death was walking, whispering to her
Promising a journey free from all the pain
By her side, kneeling, head bowed in prayer
Final moments rushing by, hurried like autumn leaves
Memories of summers past, strolling through wild heather
Soon to be a raindrop in the storm of life
A last look up from her dying eyes
Seeking approval to leave, never to return
Through the sorrow he smiled, nodded his consent
Finally peaceful sleep whispered her goodbye
He would take her to a place where she was always free
High on the moorland where the air was so sweet
A trusted companion, his oldest faithful friend
His gentle lady, free to run the sky
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Re: Run The Sky
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by pixie on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:46:25 PM AEST
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awww so sad, yet so beautiful,
pixie xx |
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Re: Run The Sky
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by lunartune on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:15:13 PM AEST
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| Wow! that's extreamly good! Very sad, but a really good write. |
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Re: Run The Sky
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by shelby on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:29:34 PM AEST
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awwww this tugged at my heart so brought tears to my eyes yes your right they are a true best friend Im very sorry for your loss
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Run The Sky
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:59:41 PM AEST
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| powerful write. |
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Re: Run The Sky
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by Rxqueen on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:32:46 AM AEST
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By her side, kneeling, head bowed in prayer
Final moments rushing by, hurried like autumn leaves
Memories of summers past, strolling through wild heather
Soon to be a raindrop in the storm of life
That is an amazing stanza! And an amazing write! Good job, very beautiful use of language. |
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Re: Run The Sky
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:24:41 PM AEST
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A dog is sure a mans best friend. They are loyal and true.
So sorry for your loss
A beautiful sad poem
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Run The Sky
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by KaylaNoelHohn on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 03:40:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem..
kayla |
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