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Me?
Contributed by
ImHearingVoices
on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:59:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Im a mess, failure, disgrace,
Im a waste of space
I wanna cut up this face, Delete this case.
I try,
I fly,
I fall,
I die.
Then I met you, train journey
eyes blue.
But still it hurts..
It's me
It's me
It's me
It's me, Myself, It's I
All your Love and still i cry.
I'm weak, ugly, not me
I'm everything I'd hate to be.
I wish I could drown in my own blood,
Inflicted from what I would if I could,
But they never go that far,
I'm just left to scar,
The pain will pass till tomorrow.
you say, you say, you say,
"I'm beautiful, amazing here to stay"
But I can't believe in myself
This face, this Body, This race
I wish I was her or She or Them
Maybe then I'd believe in life,
I'd swim not drown
I'd fly not fall
Maybe then I'd have it all?
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Re: Me?
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:07:43 PM AEST
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wow.. When did you write that one?
Its f**kin well good |
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Re: Me?
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by Jen54 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 04:41:51 PM AEST
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Thats a really great poem.
I can relate to it so well.
Keep it up!!!
-Jen |
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Re: Me?
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by blossomingcherry5353 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 04:49:58 PM AEST
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This is a really great write. If your thinking of doing this please, don't. If you need someone to talk to. You can email me and I'll email you right back. But I must say that this poem describs a lot about life. I know many people who wish to do this.
shasha
Like I said great poem |
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:58:06 PM AEST
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| i thought this was excellent for a first write. some of the rhymes seem forced, but thats fine. =] really fantastic write. swimming is overrated because you never see whats below the surface when you sink. =] |
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Re: Me?
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by AdamChantell on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:32:11 PM AEST
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| wow for a first write, this is great. keep it up and i hope to see more soon. |
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Re: Me?
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by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:43:53 AM AEST
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that was very well written for your first write,i must say, keep it up,
pixie xx |
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